This is a scene from “Gwyneth
and Harold”, a tag-team writing effort that doesn’t even have a working title
other than “G&H”. It’s not much
more than a glimpse of one character… and a sample of writing. It’s definitely rough draft, but fun,
nonetheless. Enjoy!
He had the distinct
impression that he should say something, but was unsure what that something
might be.
The need passed when he
rested his head on the pillow and Gwyneth gave him a firm 'goodnight'.
Harold finally drifted off to
sleep some time before the sun came up.
It was more sleep than Gwyneth got.
Lying in the dark through the
long night, a hundred thoughts raced through her head and none of them made any
sense. Except one. She couldn't continue to lie here and do
nothing. Instead she emerged from her
side of the bed, scooping up her basic clothes before quietly leaving the
bedroom. Dressed by the time she
reached the front door, she grabbed her boots and made her way across the field
in front of the house. She wasn't quite
sure where she was going. Then again,
if she were honest with herself, she knew exactly where she was going.
"I just made a fresh pot
of tea," the MacGregor yelled from the front steps of the cottage as
Gwyneth swung open the gate. "I've
been expecting you for some time now."
"Oh, have you
now?" Gwyneth smiled as she took
the cup from his hand and passed him in the doorway. Taking a sip and releasing a long held sigh, she set the cup on the
table and collapsed onto the couch.
It was a man's house, she
thought as she surveyed the environment the MacGregor had created for himself
over a decade ago when he had decided he couldn't live in the farm house
without Mary Katherine. It was warm and
dark with rich colors woven throughout the large room that comprised the living,
working, and eating section of the building.
But it was comfortable and Gwyneth knew she had come to the right place.
"Now, Gwyn," the MacGregor began, closing the front door
behind him and looking at the waif who had curled up on his couch. "Why don't you tell me what's brought
the clouds back over your eyes?"
"Oh, Ian…"she
responded, looking up at him with dark circles that spoke volumes to the old
man. He'd seen and heard much in his
lifetime and was a shrewd judge of character and events. What alerted him to the gravity of the
situation was the use of his given name.
Gwyneth only used it when she was in great pain and before the last
breath left her mouth he had seated himself on the sofa and wrapped her in his
embrace.
"Now, Gwyn, me
darlin," he begin, hoping soothing words would take the tension away from
her body. "I'm here, child. Talk to me."
But words failed her and she
simply allowed herself to be held by the only paternal figure she had ever
truly cared about. Slowly the tears
began to form in her eyes, snaking down her cheeks and falling on his well worn
flannel shit.
"Good, girl. Cry it out if need be."
A woman's tears had never
bothered Ian MacGregor. He had always
felt closest to Mary Kate when she'd felt free enough to share her tears with
him. And never was he one to say that
men didn't cry. On the contrary, Ian
MacGregor was proud of the fact that he wept when the spirit moved him and
cautioned younger men not to avoid their own emotions.
"I don't
know." Gwyneth's words came out
with a deep sigh that let her sink deeper into pain and it was here that
Gwyneth felt safest to let pain begin to run its natural course.
"Have you an
understanding why you're weeping, child?"
Gwyneth shook her head
gently, but it was enough for Ian to comprehend her response.
"Then let it flow,
lass. Eventually the reasons will
become clear. For now, you've a need to
weep so that is what you shall do.
And so, Gwyneth spent the
next hour quietly listening to the MacGregor's words of wisdom as they washed
over all that she was feeling. She
found as much strength in his words as in his embrace. She also felt a solitude that she knew she
needed. As always, she was the last to
know.
"What is it you want,
Gwyneth?" the MacGregor began when her tears slowed a bit. "Have ya any idea at all?"
"I know what I don't
want to do," she began, easing out of his embrace a bit, but not leaving
his side.
"That's a start. And what might that be?"
"I don't want to
practice law any more." She knew
that she could say those words to the MacGregor and they'd be taken as a simple
statement of fact. Saying those words
to almost any other person in her life would have drawn a retort and an
argument. But not here.
"Good Lord,
Gwyn!" the MacGregor began in a
voice that surprised Gwyneth. Surely he
wasn't about to argue with her.
"That's the best news you've given me in months." His rich laughter made Gwyneth smile though
she wasn't quite sure why.
"It is?" she asked, hesitantly looking up at him.
"But of
course." Ian waited a minute
before going into his explanation and allowed Gwyneth the luxury of enjoying
one moment when all the important people in her life we of one accord. Briefly his thought turned to the man he had
seen at Gwyneth's side the day before and he wondered how important that
man was to her life.
"Don't misunderstand me,
lass. You're a fine barrister. One of the finest I've ever seen and with a
family full of 'em back home, I've seen more than me share. But you've so many other talents, Gwyn. And lawyering makes you into a woman not
quite the same as the woman you are truly in your heart."
Gwyneth smiled. It wasn't
such a different thing than Harold had indicated to her. Maybe it was time to allow her heart to be a
bit free.
"Well…."she began,
not sure what to say next.
"Well, nothing,
lass. You've no reason in the world not
to walk away from it. It's not like you
need the money, Gwyn. You've more than
enough, I'm sure."
"I've saved and invested
well," she said.
"Saved and invested
well? Gwyn, tell me, have you touched
the investment you made from the fee when you won my case?"
"No. It's all still there."
"Still there and then
some, I'd say. I've not touched mine either,
not the cash settlement that is and mine's grown four-fold. If yours has done the same, then you've a
cool two million dollars right there."
"Well, actually, it's a
bit more than that."
The MacGregor laughed and
knew that with Gwyneth's penchant for understatement, it was more than likely
that single nest egg had grown to nearer four million.
"And you've added to it,
I suppose?"
"Always, Ian. You taught me well about saving for that
rainy day."
"Well, it's not exactly
raining right now, lass, but the sun's not shining full on your face
either." Ian waited and let it
sink in a bit what he was saying to her.
"Leave it behind you,
Gwyneth and come home. Here's where
you'll mend the full way."
Gwyneth knew he was right and
in that instant, she knew that at least this one decision was made.
"And, Gwyn, you know
you've a bit of coin to inherit when I'm gone."
Gwyneth sat up straight like
a shot. "Ian, don't say that!"
"Don't say what? That I'm an old man and death is just
tapping his foot on the other side of the door waiting for me? Oh, Gwyn, don't deny what's the truth. And the truth is, I've had a great run in this
life, but it wouldn't sadden me much to go on and meet me Mary
Katherine." A look that ran the
gamut between sheer joy and deep sorrow crossed Ian's face. "And where else would my money go,
girl?"
Gwyneth didn't know what to
say. Ian and Mary Katherine MacGregor
had already given her everything she needed in this life and the talk of money
didn't set well with her.
"You've plenty of family
in Scotland, Ian, and that's where your money should go. To family."
The MacGregor's famous laugh
filled the cottage as he wrapped his arms around her again and drew her into
his enormous embrace. "Aye, Gwyn,
I've plenty of relations back in the old country. And each of them has had my purse to get an education and their
children and their grandchildren, but I've not been back there in 40 years and
they've not been here. They're good
relations, Gwyn, but as for family, you and Mary Katherine are all the family
I've ever needed or wanted. Have you no
idea how much she loved you as her daughter?"
Gwyneth closed her eyes as
she let her mind wander back over the time she had spent with Mary Katherine
MacGregor. A life's worth of longing
for maternal love, affection, and guidance had been fulfilled in the few short
years they had together. Mary Kate had
taught Gwyneth about all the gentle things in life-how to sew, to quilt, to
paint, to tend the garden, to cook, and those things a gentlewoman
pursued. But, she'd also taught Gwyneth
about the fierceness of love, the importance of forgiveness, and the zest one
needed to attack life. Together with
Ian, they had taught her the value of a well saved penny and the shrewdness
needed to survive in the world, all tempered with compassion and care. Had an angel allowed Gwyneth to create the
perfect parents, they would have been no different than Ian and Mary Katherine.
"She was the perfect
mother to me," Gwyneth whispered
as the tears again rolled down her cheeks.
"And you are the perfect father."
In that moment, tears began
to well up in another set of eyes and the two held each other for a while as
memories and dreams washed over them, filling both their hearts with love and
warmth.
"There's another thing I
need to be telling ya, Gwyn," Ian
began after they'd both shed the tears their hearts required. "I've put your studio to rights."
Gwyneth wasn't sure what she
had expected Ian to say, but it hadn't been that. She sat up and looked at him with shock on her face.
"You what?"
"You trashed it well,
Gwyneth, before you left and I finally decided it needed puttin' back in
order."
"But, MacGregor, you had
no right!"
"I've every right
because I love ya," he said, watching her rise from her seat next to him
and start pacing the room. He hated to
see her like this, so filled with a mixture of anger and pain. "You've a gift, Gwyneth, and I don't
want to see it tossed away. Paint or
don't paint. It's your choice, I know,
but I'll not see you miss the chance just because your studio was filled with
memories of him."
Gwyneth froze and stared at
Ian. They'd not spoken of Hank in such
a long time. Not since the night Ian
wanted to kill the man, but had preferred to offer what comfort he could to the
woman he loved as a daughter.
"I can tell by the look
in your eyes, Gwyn. You've begun to travel the road back from all that and I'm
thinkin' it's time we spoke of it.
Perhaps it will help you take the next steps."
Gwyneth sank into the chair
nearest the fire and looked at Ian with red-rimmed eyes. "I don't think I can, Ian." The pleading in her voice almost stopped
him, but he was determined to help her begin to get past this.
"You can, Gwyn. You know you can. You painted some marvelous things while he was in your life, but
he wasn't the reason for their glory.
It was your talent and your work."
He let those words sink in before continuing. "All the work you did with him there, even the canvases you
slashed, are stored in the shed behind the cabin here. You've no need to ever look at them again,
if you so choose, but everything else remains in your studio." He watched as little by little what he was
saying made it into her brain.
"The studio walls have been washed and painted. The glass has been replaced. The handles have been replaced on the
brushes you broke and there's a fresh canvas sitting on your easel. It's all there if you want to go back to
what you had before, Gwyn. Long
before."
"But… " she began,
her voice trailing off. She had no
words now as memories flooded her mind.
And Ian was determined to
make sure she had good memories to squeeze out the bad ones.
"Oh, Gwyneth. You know the seasons series? The ones of the outcrop of rocks that you
painted a few years after Mary Kate passed on?" Gwyneth nodded and he continued. "Gwyneth, the Lord himself
couldn't have painted those better and he's a fine hand with a brush."
Gwyneth smiled as she
remembered the rush she'd gotten from painting those very pictures. The enormous canvases had been leaned
against the far wall of the studio, too big for an easel, but almost too small
for her vision. They'd been her gift to
the memory of Mary Katherine and nothing would have made her part with them.
"Why, Gwyn, that fancy
man gallery owner from Philadelphia said he'd give you half a million dollars
for them and you know he'd have sold them for at least twice that."
For the first time during
this long day, Gwyneth actually laughed remembering the negotiations the
gallery owner had tried and all the machinations employed. All the while, the MacGregor was watching
and willing to step in. It hadn't been
needed and the two of them had celebrated her small victory over one man's
greed.
"It was a fine thing to
watch, Gwyn," the MacGregor laughed, the twinkle returning to his
eyes. "The poor man didn't know
what had hit him."
Filled with love, Gwyneth
returned to the couch, giving the MacGregor an enormous hug of her own. "We're a fine team, eh,
MacGregor?"
"That we are, lass. That we are."
He hugged her in return. His heart filled with pride and love and
joy, along with a small glimmer of hope that Gwyneth was at last on the road
back to wholeness.
When the MacGregor moved his
hand, it never registered with Gwyneth.
It did however register with the man about to knock on the door. Instead, he opened quietly and walked into
the room. In an instant it became clear
to Harold that Gwyneth had spent these last few hours deeply embedded in both
joy and pain. He walked in and
said….
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